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03-03-2013, 03:59 AM
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My NEW BUSINESS
Please visit my new companies website
http://www.realestateogrllc.com/ My friend & I are just getting started and I am building this website. I would appreciate your feedback.:2cents: Thanks, PHILLYGOAT:)
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PHILLYGOAT 1965 GTO/ OEM Block, Crank & D-ports(all slightly modified of course)/ 3550lbs/ Full Exhaust/ Foot Braking 1.41 60ft [email protected] [email protected](Pontiac Heaven)  More Details on GOAT http://www.pontiaczone.com/forum/vbpicgallery.php?do=view&g=379 GTO Burnout http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nZqdcH0Ltc4 |
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03-03-2013, 04:04 AM
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Here is our Facebook page too. Please Like us.
https://www.facebook.com/OGREnterprisesLLC Thanks again, PHILLYGOAT
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PHILLYGOAT 1965 GTO/ OEM Block, Crank & D-ports(all slightly modified of course)/ 3550lbs/ Full Exhaust/ Foot Braking 1.41 60ft [email protected] [email protected](Pontiac Heaven) More Details on GOAT http://www.pontiaczone.com/forum/vbpicgallery.php?do=view&g=379 GTO Burnout http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nZqdcH0Ltc4 |
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03-03-2013, 10:59 AM
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Looks like a good start to a promising business!
Since you asked for feedback, here's a couple to consider- At the end of your paragraphs, where you are asking readers to click on the links above, you might want to turn the text that is underlined into a link that goes to the same place. The reader is already there, you don't want them to not find the above links. Your color choices are a bit too pastel for me, but that's just a personal opinion. If you try to put yourself into your customers shoes, what are they looking for? Are there colors that make them think of a new house? Green lawns, white picket fences, modern siding colors? Just a thought. If you do a fixer-upper page, A picture of an outstanding property, but a bit run down, would get me excited- but a run down house is NOT a good pic for your main page! Good luck with your project. ***edit*** I just looked at your facebook page, and liked it. The pic and the colors there are great! Kurt |
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03-03-2013, 11:40 AM
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THANKS KURT!
Great feedback!
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PHILLYGOAT 1965 GTO/ OEM Block, Crank & D-ports(all slightly modified of course)/ 3550lbs/ Full Exhaust/ Foot Braking 1.41 60ft [email protected] [email protected](Pontiac Heaven) More Details on GOAT http://www.pontiaczone.com/forum/vbpicgallery.php?do=view&g=379 GTO Burnout http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nZqdcH0Ltc4 |
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03-03-2013, 11:43 AM
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Website isn't too bad.
On your 'Home' page I would add your name to the title html. This way when some one adds you to their Bookmarks they don't get another "Home". I must have thousands of them. Use something like: OGR Enterprises LLC - Home Do you work all over the US? Also do you have to be a Realtor to do this? :)
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John Wallace - johnta1 Pontiac Power RULES !!! www.wallaceracing.com Winner of Top Class at Pontiac Nationals, 2004 Cordova Winner of Quick 16 At Ames 2004 Pontiac Tripower Nats KRE's MR-1 - 1st 5 second Pontiac block ever! W.E.C moment "Every man has a right to his own opinion, but no man has a right to be wrong in his facts." "People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid." – Socrates |
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03-03-2013, 01:43 PM
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John,
we are just starting in Ohio & Colorado, may branch out soon. You do NOT need to be a Real Estate agent to do this. There are things that could get you into trouble(Fines/Jail) if you do not do things right. The proper education/guidance is necessary! PHILLYGOAT
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PHILLYGOAT 1965 GTO/ OEM Block, Crank & D-ports(all slightly modified of course)/ 3550lbs/ Full Exhaust/ Foot Braking 1.41 60ft [email protected] [email protected](Pontiac Heaven) More Details on GOAT http://www.pontiaczone.com/forum/vbpicgallery.php?do=view&g=379 GTO Burnout http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nZqdcH0Ltc4 |
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03-03-2013, 03:12 PM
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I updated the colors for a little more POP!
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PHILLYGOAT 1965 GTO/ OEM Block, Crank & D-ports(all slightly modified of course)/ 3550lbs/ Full Exhaust/ Foot Braking 1.41 60ft [email protected] [email protected](Pontiac Heaven) More Details on GOAT http://www.pontiaczone.com/forum/vbpicgallery.php?do=view&g=379 GTO Burnout http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nZqdcH0Ltc4 |
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